Sunday, December 6, 2015

With a thump down the chimney he came,as happy as a reindeer,as quick as a cheetah. He had  a jolly red suit and hat,black shoes and pants.I was slowly tip toeing towards him as he was putting colourful presents under the bright Christmas tree.I yelled “SANTA!”Next thing I know he ran as fast as he could,then I had no idea where he was.Then I saw a light red sleigh and some sort of reindeer that had a bright red nose and Santa yelled, “HO HO HO Merry Christmas!”The next awesome morning I realized that it was the best Christmas ever!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Micheal nice post! I liked how you used lots of description and the colours for like colourful. Next time you might want to check for spelling mistakes and spaces after commas and sentences. Overall BRAVO!!!